tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post1556475472029591807..comments2024-02-21T09:02:10.761-05:00Comments on Two Bears Farm and the Three Cubs: Barbara Gets Her Nails DoneLisa @ Two Bears Farmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03464839163693785901noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-43096146921062876822011-01-22T00:36:51.992-05:002011-01-22T00:36:51.992-05:00Poor Barbara, I hope zumba does it for her. I love...Poor Barbara, I hope zumba does it for her. I loved the dialect you used.Jessica Annehttp://adventureswiththreegirls.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-42272916431964767292011-01-21T22:03:51.081-05:002011-01-21T22:03:51.081-05:00Your Barbara is so very relateable. I can think of...Your Barbara is so very relateable. I can think of plenty of women that go through this. Your dialogue is perfect too. <br /><br />Great job!{Stephanie}The Drama Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01643310288610990260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-90308295192696704362011-01-21T21:51:09.745-05:002011-01-21T21:51:09.745-05:00You portrayed Barbara's loneliness and despera...You portrayed Barbara's loneliness and desperation very well! And Mimi was a perfect foil, kind and reassuring but detached. Nice job!Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14025221975648580117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-31686358440548389432011-01-21T19:39:48.712-05:002011-01-21T19:39:48.712-05:00aw, poor Barbara.... I hope she realizes the other...aw, poor Barbara.... I hope she realizes the other girls are just jerks, she seems to nice and she isn't even real :)Cristinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15064636500827230911noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-60661752751401026352011-01-21T16:57:00.585-05:002011-01-21T16:57:00.585-05:00Oh, Barbara. You are just trying too hard. Beyours...Oh, Barbara. You are just trying too hard. Beyourself, don't try to make friends with cake. Por woman. <br /><br />Perfect setting. And as the second commenter said, Barbara should try blogging! ;)Andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06972798018825603047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-17665833519934711142011-01-21T16:27:36.896-05:002011-01-21T16:27:36.896-05:00I sympathized with Barbara---because I saw myself ...I sympathized with Barbara---because I saw myself in her. I don't gab at the nail salon (nor do I go there very often), but I do feel left out a lot of times, and lonely. Like the other girls don't want to hang out with me. stupid, i know.<br />I'm so glad you linked up and did this today--and you were too hard on yourself. I think Barbara is a great character and now I want to get to know her better!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13214914707096410664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-77340712120740966302011-01-21T15:05:12.923-05:002011-01-21T15:05:12.923-05:00That sucks. Poor Barbara.
You picked a perfect se...That sucks. Poor Barbara.<br /><br />You picked a perfect setting for a heart-to-heat mini therapy session. Men get the bars, women get the nail salon! This was very realistic and it flowed beautifully.<br /><br />Visiting from RDCCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-77487126741876395652011-01-21T15:03:39.041-05:002011-01-21T15:03:39.041-05:00In the end what this piece really made me think ab...In the end what this piece really made me think about what Mimi and all of the Barbara's and Vicki's that she must meet. I thought the dialogue was true to someone who doesn't get a chance to talk to 'friends' very much, people like this tend to overshare to say the least.Jenniferhttp://whispatory.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-13805745922578011542011-01-21T08:35:48.162-05:002011-01-21T08:35:48.162-05:00I knew someone a few years ago like Barbara-she ju...I knew someone a few years ago like Barbara-she just tried too hard to make friends and she came across as desperate. I'd like to see Barbara learn to love herself eventually:)<br /><br />See-this piece was so real I really care about this girl!<br /><br />Good work!Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-45921738241572699242011-01-21T02:38:07.891-05:002011-01-21T02:38:07.891-05:00Wow, good job! I was really feeling bad for Barbar...Wow, good job! I was really feeling bad for Barbara.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-43878772325138845322011-01-20T17:57:42.848-05:002011-01-20T17:57:42.848-05:00Very good, excellent! Love the details. :)Very good, excellent! Love the details. :)Nancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06116903234641971344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-84933586503487118272011-01-20T15:59:39.131-05:002011-01-20T15:59:39.131-05:00Don't send Barbara to the Hollow, Baby Girl! ...Don't send Barbara to the Hollow, Baby Girl! I draw the line somewhere! Besides, I ripped out Mint today with my bear hands and she wouldn't like the looks of my hands, let alone the "doo"!...:)JPjp@A Green Ridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15217268829093983376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-4361790906913465522011-01-20T13:30:59.232-05:002011-01-20T13:30:59.232-05:00I think this is one of your writings - excellent -...I think this is one of your writings - excellent - would love to read more. sandieChatty Cronehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02232040517217024681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-4306136690813725842011-01-20T09:54:38.842-05:002011-01-20T09:54:38.842-05:00Well, you picked the perfect place to set your sho...Well, you picked the perfect place to set your short story - I stopped going to salons because I couldn't stand the constant chatter! And even if I didn't talk, it was all around me!!! <br /><br />Poor Barbara. She should at least try blogging...TexWisGirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15510099344729038541noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-21632872863267781162011-01-20T07:27:54.376-05:002011-01-20T07:27:54.376-05:00I hope she makes other friends, but I am glad you ...I hope she makes other friends, but I am glad you has someone to talk too.JDaniel4's Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10354900916937838719noreply@blogger.com