tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post4368598304798536216..comments2024-02-21T09:02:10.761-05:00Comments on Two Bears Farm and the Three Cubs: The Longest NightLisa @ Two Bears Farmhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03464839163693785901noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-46687326880337025532011-06-12T06:58:54.453-04:002011-06-12T06:58:54.453-04:00I am so riveted and I am so mad at that mom! We ne...I am so riveted and I am so mad at that mom! We need more.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03431751293876429570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-138525429885405662011-06-10T21:11:09.067-04:002011-06-10T21:11:09.067-04:00I like it. I've got images in my head from it ...I like it. I've got images in my head from it and they seem alive. You said just the right things so that my brain got busy building your implied world. That's the best kind of story.EllieFhttp://writepiperwrite.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-6056962392504445132011-06-10T16:16:26.246-04:002011-06-10T16:16:26.246-04:00You are talented with these "Night" stor...You are talented with these "Night" stories. ReallyKim@stuffcould....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03566751822418137457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-41399893713634639402011-06-10T13:01:53.245-04:002011-06-10T13:01:53.245-04:00Spooky... but I'm glad for the baby that Ameli...Spooky... but I'm glad for the baby that Amelia's snapped out of it.<br /><br />You write this atmosphere so very well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-36696448377616346812011-06-10T10:03:55.332-04:002011-06-10T10:03:55.332-04:00You have such convincing characters here and I ado...You have such convincing characters here and I adore the backdrop for the story.Tina L. Hookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12780807680745838371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-28465908728834752242011-06-10T09:36:05.334-04:002011-06-10T09:36:05.334-04:00This piece works. I buy the scene. Like many sou...This piece works. I buy the scene. Like many southern writers, the landscape works beautifully into the piece--I went back and the read the once before. The language is authentic but not over done. Please tell me that your character won't only love this baby if he's white. Tell me it's jaundice. Tell many anything but racism.Honest Convo Galhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04164936942751145568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-22758221739938025412011-06-10T09:34:19.811-04:002011-06-10T09:34:19.811-04:00You render this scene beautiful. I went back and ...You render this scene beautiful. I went back and read the preceding one too. Well done. I am concerned though...please tell me this mama isn't going to love this baby if he gets whiter...say it isn't so...But that just means you've made me care what happens, which is good writing. I'm a mountain girl myself and I love the way you weave our way of life into your stories. Well done.Honest Convo Galhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04164936942751145568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-59158137995794422692011-06-10T08:12:43.208-04:002011-06-10T08:12:43.208-04:00You are leaving me hanging. I want to know what ha...You are leaving me hanging. I want to know what happens next already. I love the color you paint your stories with.The Drama mamahttp://frommywriteside.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-59786099493199319012011-06-10T07:11:57.416-04:002011-06-10T07:11:57.416-04:00Loved the unexpected ending. Now maybe the babe...Loved the unexpected ending. Now maybe the babe's mom might care for him. I like the era in which the story takes place so many things can be issues. This story could go and on. I would love to read where it goes from here.julie moorehttp://juliemooreonlife.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-26614940857832775162011-06-09T22:34:59.319-04:002011-06-09T22:34:59.319-04:00I would love to see a picture of mittens on his fe...I would love to see a picture of mittens on his feet.JDaniel4's Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10354900916937838719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-64041275836973903202011-06-09T16:58:28.863-04:002011-06-09T16:58:28.863-04:00I came in for a break and I found one here. You le...I came in for a break and I found one here. You left me wanting more. Keep writing mountain lady. :-)<br />~crowCrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13450175157643194938noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-67469794000273390112011-06-09T15:07:46.537-04:002011-06-09T15:07:46.537-04:00Oh, good story brewing here. I need to go read and...Oh, good story brewing here. I need to go read and reread more of the previous installments. <br />I love the voices of your characters. I can hear them.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-64643312815605188662011-06-09T14:16:38.242-04:002011-06-09T14:16:38.242-04:00Fantastic follow up. Flowed wonderfully with GREAT...Fantastic follow up. Flowed wonderfully with GREAT elements...Mistyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09505420894898738638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-57229433286519158402011-06-09T13:52:27.059-04:002011-06-09T13:52:27.059-04:00Okay, you are going to have to resume this tomorro...Okay, you are going to have to resume this tomorrow! <br /><br />And I'm sorry about the coon and your hens. <br /><br />We lost two hens and a duck. And I have no idea how he's getting into the coop. Shane will have to trap him when he gets home. I've blocked off the section that seems to be the problem for now.Nancyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06116903234641971344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-49441520783395772252011-06-09T12:21:38.725-04:002011-06-09T12:21:38.725-04:00Cool post...Cool post...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-5972309324466897172011-06-09T11:47:53.987-04:002011-06-09T11:47:53.987-04:00Wow, you have so much edge-of-the-seat drama! Mayb...Wow, you have so much edge-of-the-seat drama! Maybe you should try to sell your stories?Ginny Hartzlerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09329131153403895625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-32406357528662160962011-06-09T11:27:54.124-04:002011-06-09T11:27:54.124-04:00WOW.
This is a story, and the simple images.
I l...WOW.<br /><br />This is a story, and the simple images.<br /><br />I love that so much more than extra, not needed, flowery adjectives.<br /><br />This was raw and real.<br /><br />Perfect.Alexandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00609629888008025050noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-24689095668680540912011-06-09T11:18:47.527-04:002011-06-09T11:18:47.527-04:00whoa, that kept me on pins and needles - what'...whoa, that kept me on pins and needles - what's next??? -Good writing,Lisa!Lisa Sall - Sall's Country Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729015228245019482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-7669658311693362232011-06-09T10:38:05.093-04:002011-06-09T10:38:05.093-04:00Dito on the comment from texwis girl!! Whats next?...Dito on the comment from texwis girl!! Whats next??LBBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01139843269866420368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-5257174607476195012011-06-09T09:40:08.689-04:002011-06-09T09:40:08.689-04:00I can't wait to see where this story goes next...I can't wait to see where this story goes next-I love it! <br /><br />Once again I have to say that I love your imagery-"light crawled on tender paws across the valley" is wonderful!<br /><br />Great job Lisa! Now go write some more:)Valerie Boersmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08372768206512562126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5356235511941477035.post-83663193952412421142011-06-09T08:33:30.507-04:002011-06-09T08:33:30.507-04:00I hope she is know interested in caring for he lit...I hope she is know interested in caring for he little one.JDaniel4's Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10354900916937838719noreply@blogger.com